Today I’m going to show you how to improve your rap lyrics by building bridges.
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I feel like im not going well and not rhyme well can you help me
I can jiggle, I can swiggle, I can romance
After all, this is only France
I'm now Cupid, here comes a love blaster
Have a treat as you fall in love with the rap master
If you're Hulk, then I'm Hulkbuster
If you're tough, then I'm your biggest disaster
I've taken down powerful nutheads and silly birds
Sorry Nigga, prepare to eat your own words
I'm spitting bars, racin stars
I'm getting fast, rappin hard
You better fall, or I'll come after your girl
So don't wreck my balls that you stole
This is rhyme scheme, a bridge connects verses to chorus visaversa
Before
My life has been filled with so much pain
At times I thought I’d never make it through the rain
After
My life has been filled with so much pain
Remember being hungry scrapping for change
I had a dream now I’m in a rolls switching lanes
At times I thought I’d never make it through the rain
Playing this insrumental is pretty mental
I'm just sat with a notepad just writing rhymes.
Playing this insrumental is pretty mental
All the sounds the words Playing inside my temple.
All the sounds tha words circling inside my mind.
I'm just sat wit a notepad just writing rhymes.
You don't have to lie
Hate inside your heart
So I continue to cry being alone in the dark
You not a mc
Thank's for the knowledge
Yoooooooo that first examples blow my mind ???????
About to introduce you all to some of this backwoods pimping
Every time they see me they know I'm on a mission
About to introduce you to some of this backyard pimpin
Every time I hit the woods straight hunting and fishin
And you know when I see that deer I stay up on the mission
Can't stop till he's in the kitchen grillin
You know that's a magical feelin
*Is this correct?
Before COLE MIZE=No Pity hugs…We Get it out, da Gritty mud,
No petty broads…See a Goddess in us, With a goddess….
Intuition….. guided, We divine designing,
AFTER COLE MIZE=No Pity hugs, No petty broad I mind u
We Get it out, da Gritty mud, n women love da mind too
See a Goddess in us, Witta goddess right here, she mine too
Intuition guided, We divine designing, im mining
Hey Cole, do you know a program which seperates the lyrics from the beat (of a finishied, mixed track) so that you can see the structure of the lyrics around the beat. Greetings from Germany and thank you for your great work 😀
When it comes to rap there's no rules only techniques
So why these lame rappers sound like I swallowed the key
The whole game locked up and that's how i feel
Am too hot so I cut through easy like Butter and cheese
Kill it kill it kill it kill it kill it kill it
If I'm a cartoon, why do I eat carrots?
Why's my fur green? Like it's made of drugs
…
If I'm a cartoon, why do I eat carrots?
I judge every karat based on its merits
Why's my fur green, like it's made of drugs?
It's for the green paper, I'm not jealous of Bugs
To avoid any misconceptions: I should point out that this isn't what people mean when they refer to the bridge of a song.
Rapping be my game changer
Hot spitting melting down influenza
After
Rapping be my game changer
Once I touch the mic,thriller
Once I start to rhyme, killer
Hot spitting melting down influenza
Is there a place where I could find ur music
Five trappers in the bin/
Bye suckers now i Win/
I put five trappers in the bin/
Cuz i ve mastered the high hats and the tricks/
Like a witch, ate 9 wrappers with sweets/
Now bye suckers i win bitch/
Before:
I'm cold-hearted, you're as warm as an ice tea /
I'm love-blinded, you should know what I mean /
After:
I'm cold-hearted, you're as warm as an ice tea /
I kill rappers' careers, cut-throats, cold as ice is /
I can be soft though, if I take things lightly /
At times I'm love-blinded, you know what I mean /
Yo Cole, let go with working on building bridges.
(Here are the first two lines)
This first line is all about how I been hurt
That why I wear a broken heart t-shirt
(Here are two lines between lines one and two which create a bridge)
This first line is all about how I been hurt
Never know I would need some support
I called the police to file report
That why I wear a broken hear t-shirt
Wait doesn’t it have come after the hook? So we can write it anywhere in a verse !
Perfect as always
fire ?
100 percent accurate. Beat thing you can do is always rephrase lyrics to sound more natural of language. The more natural it sounds the better it's gonna connect. Make it almost conversational
Last one I promise.. but this my guiltiest pleasure/ I’m filthy as fuck my nigga.. I’m stroking this bitch up forever..
I’m Busting it down/ I’m giving ya mental a picture.. like
Smoking and getting my shit sucked… this movie right with as the big ones… I’m crushing it now/