These are small finishing touches that will help take a song from good to great.
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1. Pay Attention To Vowel Sounds 00:37
2. Syllable Placement 01:12
3. Chord Motion 01:50
4. Melody Start and End Points 04:19
5. Lyrical Spotlights 04:49
6. Pronoun Consistency 05:30
7. Verb Tense Consistency 06:03
8. Lyrical Direction 06:57
9. Create a Character We Can Root For 7:20
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Songwriting is so hard work, but filled with passion. I just finished my very first song. Would be great if you people could have a look (ear) and tell me your opinion. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pCa_tsZVFUU
Great lesson! I'm wanting to write instrumental guitar pieces for my own amusement. So far I've written 5 of them and have put them in AABA form, and I've extended them to a kind of "Rondo" structure (AABACA) to make them a bit more interesting. I just wish I knew more of the "rules" of musical form for writing my parts…I have so many questions…Like can an instrumental piece simply be a collection of 8 bar sections strung together in whatever order, with some sections repeating? Would be awesome to know…
I was expecting this to be a generic and trite songwriting video but it was actually really good and I learned a lot. Thank you!
Sorry, man. I had to cut you off, to go listen to this song. I hope I didn't offend you. (feel free to use this line in a song.)
Yours truely
A Fan.
The good kind. Not the ones that follow you home at night.
Did the Aqualung character have any redeeming traits?
He evokes empathy, I guess.
According to that first tip, van morrison is one of the worst songwriters ever
7:21 but Betty
If you like pronoun inconsistency, listen to any Maroon 5 song
I like your no nonsense content, subbed
*Tips for being a good songwriter: practice grammar and writing. But go buy this book lol.*
This are legit great advises, nice
Great advice and presentation bro, thank you!!
Thank you Sensei
1:05 IIII DID IT MYYYYYY WAAAAAAAAYYYYY
This is great advice. Thank you so much. You are a very smart dude.
the pronoun and tense consistency can be toyed with… Listen to tangled up in blue by Bob Dylan. A masterpiece
You're like a younger Pat Pattison.
I love all the lyrical tips! Thank you.
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Don't try to speak like a robot, make it more conversational. Good advices though ?
Wish you touched more on the song structure and less on the lyrics. I think most people dont really listen to lyrics enough to have it make a difference. Although you do make good points on the emphasis which you should place on syllables
Well, I think I'm a pretty good songwriter but I thank you for the tips any way.
Hey bro the secret of getting great songs consistently is working hard, write alot and write even if your not inspired, but i gat a question on how you go about this, so is it better to write alot of songs different songs and choose the best from the many songs you have written or work on one song till you get it right in short rewriting the melody the lyrics. Which way is better cuz i'm having a hard time deciding which is the best way to go, please assit me.
Current pop doesn't change chords between sections, only melody/phrasing. Might be nice to address in how to maintain interest without relying on harmony in a future video.
Current pop doesn't change chords between sections, only melody/phrasing. Might be nice to address in how to maintain interest without relying on harmony in a future video.
It's called a B Diminished chord not B minor flat 5! Also- your harmonic advice only has diatonic chords while a lot of great songs don't have diatonic chords.
Decent little primer
Your name is Steve? I Thought it was Samurai….?
Willie Nelson, one of the greatest, always wrote a song with one draft.
Lana Del Rey's video games does not have pronoun consistensy and that made the song a little less likeable
Man this video was so unbelievably helpful
Dude, thank you so much for the tip of starting on a different chord each section! Please make more videos on songwriting.
One of the criminally overlooked aspects of songwriting in my not-so-humble opinion is arrangement. A good arrangement can salvage a mediocre tune and poor arrangement on the oyjer hand can easily ruin a musical masterpiece.
You have any feedback for this song?
https://youtu.be/_Enl_ArqiRg
I enjoyed this lesson and found the tips to be useful. Thanks Steve!
Sound advice brother!