In this video, you’ll learn how to improve your rap lyrics by using themes. These Hip-Hop Songwriting Tips will cause your lyrics to be much more cohesive, connected, and entertaining!

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23 Replies to “How To Improve Your Rap Lyrics By Using Themes | Hip-Hop Songwriting Tips”

  1. I'm subbing for more advice, as I feel the way I'm trying to do things aren't well. I still need to understand the themes a little better and not overcomplicate things because at the moment, I'm just writing lyrics because I can. I'll be watching more of your videos to help me out as I'm writing a song with my best mate and I'm gonna need the help and advice for future lyrics and songs to come. Hopefully I can share my lyrics with you soon to see how I'm going. Thanks for the help!

    – Chaos 🙂

  2. So I was feelin' back then like I was a mini pecca
    I been dealin' with small man syndrome every second
    But I been sealin' it off on the phone and the plot thickened
    Fighting allegations like I was in Rome got coliseuly sickened by it

    I've only been rapping 6 months so please excuse it being so bad also my mother tongue isn't English so excuse my grammar

  3. I’m aiming for a mil. But I ain’t even close yet.
    Visions of me swimming in the money got my clothes wet.
    Every rapper sounding the same it’s no expansion it’s all thug passion gun blasting and fashion.
    What happened?
    This ain’t a movie. So how they shooting and catching bodies like call of duty?

    Lyrics by me “my way” on my channel check me out Cole!

  4. lmao "beat it like mike" michael jackson made "beat it" and mike tyson used to beat people up, so "beat it like mike" is actually a heavy BAR!
    edit: mike tyson also used to have a masturbation problem so "beat it like mike" is even deeper

  5. I'm the crazy, the gravy, the hip hop baby
    Insane in the brain I got the sauce, you can't tame me
    Lone wolf, engulf, emcees who sound samey
    But similar styles stay so, the scene screams 'Save me!'

    See im still solo, but still not sane
    My vocab range, is lethal like a moab plane
    To drop bombs that'll mess you up, Go and change,
    so I can grab the mic n, smoke that thang

  6. Hey Colez, I love your vids bro and honestly have learned so much from them!
    I was wondering if you’d have a spare few minutes to check out the track Progress on my channel. I just need pointers please. The production isn’t great I’ll be honest, but the lyrics is what I’m looking to highlight and hopefully better my skills in future at..
    I’d deeply appreciate it bro, keep ‘em vids coming!

  7. theres no way this storys going togo untold
    sorry pops but that's just, not how I roll
    whats done in dark comes to light, to get exposed.
    struggle with depression thats down inside my soul.
    you drop a line from time to time. you must think im slow.
    a quick hi and bye then hey son i gotta go
    your dead to me, now your coffins closed,
    you can stay in the past you are just a ghost

    *Main theme my dad the ghost,sub theme:(speed slow/fast),light/dark,and direction

  8. First time commenting. I watch all your videos. I do poetry but I’m trying to decide if I want to stay in this lane or venture into rap. Your videos are so helpful because it helps to break down those barriers that frustrate the writing process. Keep it coming.

  9. I hear them yelling at the bar I'm a star
    When it comes to mixing drinks
    They challenge how good you really are
    Drink up, how am I doing so far?

    I must be pretty good because I still have a job
    I'm not a slob that's why I work for Bob
    Who slays it on the grill putting steaks on plates
    People come here whenever they want a break

    Now the music here is also poppin
    Got a few Bands that come in here rockin
    We be pulling door prizes out of stockins
    Best in the city, we have everybody locked in!

    Let's Go LOL~

  10. Love using themes because it helps to guide where I want to take the audience.

    This is my verse I wrote for our song FLEX’N:
    Cruising down Mexico
    Headed for the car show
    Honda on my right
    An He hittin that high note

    B eighteen c snail storing energy
    Ready for my monster,
    But You ain’t never heard of me

    6 point 7
    and my intervals forged (breath)
    Torque don’t quit
    and my horse power more

    1 2 3
    Its peddle to the floor
    Tires gripping asphalt
    engine begging more

    playin wit my victim
    Let’em think that he’s winnin
    gonna find out
    He ain’t competition

    Droppin down a gear
    Now Im sense’n on his fear
    Pennywise mother fucka
    Get the fuck up outta here

    I seen your movies
    you can’t run
    You tried to be a winner
    But the loser club won

    Back to the sewers
    You can float down there
    Next turn off
    That’s yours right there

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