Version 2 of our Songwriting assistant. https://itunes.apple.com/en/app/simple-songwriter/id310708734?mt=8.
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The Songwriter (White Mist Series Book 2)
Gwen Harper is the songwriter behind countless hits. Her biggest client elopes, leaving Trey Phoenix without a lead singer for his tour. Gwen rushes in to help Trey, an old friend and country legend.
When Trey hears Gwen sing for the first time, he calls a halt to the auditions for a replacement, despite Gwen’s insistence that she isn’t a singer. Trey convinces Gwen to take her rightful place on stage and unleash the singer inside of her. Little does he realize that the time they
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@shreddidawg I meant to say you get this ver. as free upgrade from ver 1.
it says that when you click more above. Otherwise I wasn’t doin the guitar
one but did cause upgrades. I own the drum sequencer simple beat and its
incredible what they stick into this thing. Think Roland/boss, etc. will
drop the boxes? stick a metal pedal together triggering apps here for the
floor instead of 90 – 900 dollar effects. Not saying this is that but
others are.
@danchvlr1 they put out Simple Songwriter Guitarist. I came here to check
that out and noticed this new ver 2. I am buying the SSW Guitarist now. So
far this stuff is best and seems like the guy strives to stay best with
updates so i’m gambling I won’t find anything better.
i can not findthis app in app store
That finger
Holy Crap! My Dream App!!!
Garageband does all these things….and more.
So you mentioned that the song can be saved.. But can you email it as a
midi file? If so please someone tell me and I’ll download it asap. 🙂
Fails Due To Major Lack of Editing (D Grade),
If The Songwriter had professional editing, it would have really shined. There is missing comma placement and far too many passive words. The word “was” is used too often (overkill really) including long winding sentences that could have been trimmed down and still be effective. Characters enter a scene and are not introduced right away, leaving the reader confused as to what their role is. The love scenes are too clinical and not appealing, very cut and dry. All these issues could have been fixed with a good content and copy editor.
What can’t be fixed is Gwen, the Mary Sue heroine who is, oh so perfect from her personality, to her looks (even though she has curves and isn’t “thin” and prefers to dress in jeans and T-shirts), and has a voice of an angel, even though she hasn’t had any voice training. But she can sing like a pop diva in less than two weeks because of the hero’s special training. She has known Trey for years, and in turn he asks her for help over the years, basically using her because there’s no one else he can turn to. He’s also somewhat manipulative because Gwen is a pushover when it comes to him. But because she can’t say “no” to Trey, she does what he wants, giving in very easily. Suddenly as they bond over their practicing, she gains a big boost of self-confidence. A light bulb goes off in Trey’s head (once he sees Gwen all dressed up and with makeup). Gwen is the perfect woman for him! A cliché I usually find adorable, but here it rings false here because the writing is just not up to par.
The Songwriter has so much promise, but it gets a failing grade because of no editing to speak of, which is insulting to readers who pay for something that should be a quality read. The Songwriter is far from quality.
Big pass on this lacking, unedited book.
Katiebabs
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