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http://www.cyberprmusic.com Derek Sivers talks about how Smokey Robinson and his co-writer wrote “My Girl” and re-wrote again and again until it was perfect….

I write poems about my emotions. Just recently I thought about writing a
song about abuse. I was molested. So I want the world to know and
understand what sexual assault is. I want to be the voice of those who
can’t speak up about it. I just want to be someone who others will look up
to. To allow them to express themselves freely without judgement. To let
them know it will be ok.
Your welcome I appreciate your comment
Alot of ppl can connect with your story heart to heart, you already write
poems so writing verses should come easily you just have to learn how to
structure your poems into song form, just subscribe and pay attention to my
tutorials and my website(coming this fall) and you’ll be a songwriter in no
time,
keep in touch i would like to hear the songs you write
Thank you… For the support and believing in me 🙂
5 stars for you Derek! Always worth listening to! THANKS Ariel for sharing!
:-))
Great piece of advice again, although I have read it in his book and blogs
it is so much better to hear and him speak about it instead. Btw the sound
levels on your recordings are mostly too quiet, getting loud every now and
then. It is worth compressing the audio part of your video recordings to
get a nice consistent clear sound. ~Atul~
i so needed to hear this right now! perfect timing. ariel – you so kick ass.
Exactly !!! Spend time with your rhymes!!!