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Hey guys, so this week I got a question that I’m going to modify a bit, but basically the question is asking how can you make lyrics like some of the greats. Now obviously there’s a ton of work that goes into this and some measure of natural talent, but here are the three things all the greats have in common.
Poetic skill.
First, these guys are masters of a huge range of poetic techniques. They have no problem writing an extended metaphor with multiple wordplays while holding a complex multi-syllable rhyme scheme. These guys are nothing short of masters of language. Articulating an arrangement in alliteration aint at all ardous. The flip similes like fast food workers flip burgers. The list goes on and on. If you want to get to that level, look up a bunch of poetic devices and start studying them. Here’s a few you need:
Wordplay
Simile
Metaphor
Assonance
Consonance
Imagery
And the list goes on and on. Not only do you need to be able to use all these techniques, you have to be able to seamlessly blend them together. You can work on polishing this part of your craft indefinitely.
Your own unique style
Now, to layer on top of the english skills, you need to have your own unique style. None of the greats stole a style from anyone else, they’ve all come with a style that’s different from anyone else. This can be in their beats, their topics, their delivery, their writing style, or any other variety, but no great just stole someone else’s style.
They may have, instead, stolen many small aspects from other artists, then layered their own unique spin on it. If your style is too similar to everything else that’s being put out, it will never stand alone. That’s simply the way music works, you can’t be a breakout artist by simply following established artists.
You see this a lot as various artists get bigger, many smaller artists scramble to copy their style. If you ever want to become one of the greats, I’d highly advise against this. It doesn’t mean you have to do the opposite, but you definitely have to make your music your own. Don’t be another multi-heavy eminem clone or something similar.
A message
Finally the last, and probably most important, recurring theme in all great artists is a resounding and impactful message. It doesn’t mean the message comes up in every song, but the artists that stick around for the long haul have messages that mean something. Messages that resonate with people. Sure you can rap about having money and being a baller, but how long will that last? Nas raps stories and messages about where he wants to see the world. Kendrick does the same thing. These are messages that resonate with a large community or are insightful in some way. You need to speak to people about something they care about.
These artists are making unique sounding music with meaning that’s nice to listen to, all wrapped up in poetic language. If you want even a remote chance of making an impact like that, that’s where you’ll have to start. Then you’ll need to work your face off every second of every day to refine the skills and get the exposure. Easy enough, right? Good luck out there!
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I have a question I don't know if you will see it.
I don't do end rhymes but in each line their is atleast one rhythm. My question is it bad that I don't use end rhymes at all
o.k. u working with something!!??????????????????????????????
Please listen to my music and tell me what you think ?
great vid!
You are the best
Could you tell me if this is any good?
Girl I New you were trouble all along
Probably the reason we didn’t last that long
You were too busy sucking on someones shlong
I got conned and You’re the main reason why I wrote this song
I always thought that you were better then rest
But now I know you were just a test
Now You think that I’m just a pest
You told me not to worry about the rest
But look at us now you treat me like a cow
I always ask myself how the fuck did I get to this
I feel like you just took the piss
You made me believe in happiness
Did you not get the gist?
You were so fucking crisp
Now I just feel like a dick
Do you not feel sick? For getting with that prick
You just gave me a flick
then you left so quick
You were the one that I picked
I was never strict I let you do what you want
Now I just fucking cant understand where I went wrong
How could I be so blind for that long
You know you cheated and you did so wrong
Remember our first kiss you nearly missed
You know I was dissed?
I know you’re going to come back crawling after this
You left me in the mist i find it so hard to focus on something other then us
I never knew it was a bitch hiding behind that mask
Man I hate the feeling of getting ditched for that guy that was a snitch
Huh what do you know?
He hurt you and now you’re starting to come back
Now you know what it’s like having a broken heart
Doesn’t it feel so dark?
Girl it’s never too late to restart
Nah you will find that too hard youre still getting in his car
You’re better than this
You’re not going to go far I know you’re only together for a laugh
Do you ever think of us
It feels like I’ve been chucked under a bus
Every time I try and speak you just shut my beak
When I was with you I was at my peek
But now I’m on a low
My days go so slow without you now
Why don’t you just take a bow
You’ve done enough you can’t hurt me anymore
I’m going to laugh when I see you at the store
Because all I will remember is that you’re a whore
You get slammed more then a door
I’m done with you you’ve got a few loose screws
The only thing I had to lose was you
Yo Dono, i was wondering where i should get music from. What recourses are there where i can get a large amount of untagged rap beats? As well as what kind of music should i be searching for?
This is this exact video I wanted. Thanks! Do you think some poetry books (or something like that.) would help to increase your lyrics too?