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  1. I’m planning my attack my new changlings have my back I turn pain and pleasure and nothing can measure is great love is fine Now it’s finally mine but my gigantic appetite leave me craving more because I may be bad but I’m perfectly good With love I was around me we will devour all of it starlight may have sent me back But now I’m reproducing The fact that Thorax Is in charge now it’s just morally wrong so I love the power revenge gives me it makes me feel strong and I can hypnotize love ones despise cuz I may be bad but I’m perfectly good at it with the love around we will devour all of it Starlight me have set me back But now I’m reproducing

    This is A song I called her queen crystal is revenge it started out as a rewrite of Rihanna S&M But now I think I need to add more disanent chords in the song as well as slow it down so it sounds more sinister which is funny because it’s less vulgar than the original songhttps://youtu.be/Oau6UwBeMow https://youtu.be/BsBvEFep_D8

  3. A. man just got arrested we’re owning cannabis He got a life sentence he doesn’t deserve this oh deer what are broken system he knew the sentence he got was just insane because of the situation he went from Christian to Jane cuz that doesn’t involve God he said there goes my life There goes my future my everything Might as well just kiss It all goodbye there goes my life he wanted so desperately to return back home surrounded by many people he still felt All alone as he was defenseless trembling in fear The guards will still harsh on him They just not care said there goes my wife there goes my future my everything might as well just kiss it all goodbye his he had doctors appointments that he could not afford and so his physical problems were just being ignored oh dear how we take things for granted He said there goes my life the goes my future my everything might as well just kiss it all goodbye there goes my life
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    This is my route there goes my life

  10. I don’t have a title but, here’s what I wrote (in the vein of a tool song).

    invite you to dinner and I’m completely wasted
    Let’s all talk around the elephant in the room
    Air so thick that you can taste it
    If there’s any air left in you

    Swallow up your lack of conversations
    I can see you choke every time you breathe
    Fork and knife school just cutting seeds
    It’s like the feast and the famine is what we need

    Can you feel me
    Reaching for you
    Can you feel me
    Cause it feels like I’m reaching right through…..
    you

  18. I used to write songs in my teens really fast. Now I’m writing songs in my forties and it’s a lot slower. I think my standards have crept up over the years so I edit a lot more than I used to. I think that’s good and bad.

  21. Guys I'm really young and I'm writing a trial on a song about karma(sort of) Tell me how to improve and how to improve my lyrics writing.

    Come on take a bite into my heart
    You're just a dart,you'll learn that soon.
    Think twice,I might've played nice but I never lied when I told I was your end.
    I won't ask before bending your feelings because that's how the game goes..

    Just like a fox,I lust for the kill.
    But you still want to play the goat thinking you can beat me at my game.
    I've had it my way for years so who are you anyways?

    Don't think you can run now
    All this fake love was none of reality

    Honey you walked into the wrong lane
    Should've learnt about what awaits you beforehand because you won't know what struck you once I'm done

    People may forget but karma has it's ways.
    Baby,you commited a crime out of this world
    Now,even the stars can't save you,call your witnesses.
    I was only searching for the star of my life but you killed me a thousand times.
    For you, I would be traveled a thousand miles but not anymore.

  45. RhymeZone is my Bible ! Very handy and yes, #1 Rule, "No Cliche's" they're bland and will make your song fall flat. I came here as a refresher and to get ideas from other Songwriters. I studied Songwriting from Molly Ann Leiken. If you don't know who she is, look her up at Songmd.com I'm in the process of writing a song about the Paranormal and it's not that easy like some of the other Songs I've written. Great Video. Peace ?? P.S. I liked you Scepter Song at the end.

  46. At first I thought you were a little bit to egotistical But I still had curiosity to hear You out so Please Listen On:- Today I have changed the way i would like to live my Life and it has been coming for a long Time! and over the past few Months of my life i have been told by serval different Random People that the only way to make your soul happy is to follow in what you truly believe in, as everybody has a deep gift that makes Them Them! I found my gift when I was just a young boy in the sounds of my Mothers and Older Brother’s and Older Sister’s Music and as I said earlier, Today I have changed the way i would like to live my Life, Thank You have showen me what i needed To know…
    Regards
    Supasmooth

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